I like the costume design and the way you've taken the picture the pose and everything, the only thing that comes to my mind is, I can't help but picture it being better if it had a Gothic type of surrounding like perhaps some old fashion buildings or something like that. Just my thoughts.
the title made me wonder if you had finally converted to the my chemical romance group (impossible!),but the picture was very fitting. there isn't much of a parade so to speak among people as there is among the buildings and the cars. the picture exudes urban-ness (coined word,don't kill me.) which to some extent justifies the title. the dress is black,a colour which blends in with the background of this picture,but its design causes the model to stand out. i'm not going to say it's a good shot.99.95% of the people here if not more have done that for me. it's pretty darn awesome,and it encompasses the general image of tokyo (: