This is a great picture in general! The makeup and lighting are great. Lips: Nice color and defined edges Eyes: The silver doesn't quite match the lip color. Great idea though! The eye and lip color match up very nicely! Skin: Perfectly flawless look! Very doll-like! Hair: Not a strand out of place! Pose: The model should face the left a little more instead of looking straight toward the camera, it makes it look like she's straining her neck. Or face straight forward (to the left.)
Perhaps instead of a pitch black backdrop, once the photo is taken, an editor could be used to add a silver or reddish "aura." Great picture overall!
Hello! I wrote about you as notable RGS Alumni when I was in Sec 1. Two years later, I was browsing the all time popular page and came across your deviantart again ^___^ It was a nice surprise. You're an inspiration to me.